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I am here to talk about school because it has been taking my time.
I want to have more time why because I don't have a lot of fun with my friends and family. School take all of my time school is taking 30 hours a week so I have 25 hours of free time I need some time for sports.
HI Sammy, great post. I like how you have some convincing evidence. What would you do with your extra time outside of school? Reread what you have written - add in some punctuation. For example "I want to have more time. Why? Because I don't have a lot of fun with my friends and family during school."
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