80's slide show

Slow writing

                                                             Skiing

Will I crash?

Go go go.

Although I almost crapped myself, I made it down the hill.

Zoom zoom as I went down the hill from the top I thought I was going to crash as I got distracted.

Luckily my instructor Tommy taught me well so thank you Tommy.

The strange machine

One day there was an old man who lived in New Zealand he was an Engineer who built machines, gadgets and more. He decided to make a machine that runs on water.

The next day he made the blueprints. It looks like something with lights, spinning things wheels, pistons and levers.

The purpose of the machine was for a car. If he could make this machine run he would  become a very famous and well known for the first water car. All he had to do was make this machine work. That might not seem like a hard job but it was.

After many years he finally gathered up all the stuff he needed to make this machine. But one obstacle came he crashed his car which broke vital bones and put him in a coma for 6 months. This set him back 6 months and  his bones are weaker.

He finally became able to build his car and he started building.  He calculated it to take 5 years to build.

He finally finished and he was very proud of himself. But as soon as he released it the government lock him up for 15 years because they didn’t want to lose the money they made from the petrol sales. The government made sure no one made that car again.

Delta Squad writing: Spray on glasses radio advertisement

I have been working on my writing, and was asked to write for a 30 second radio advertisement. I had to try  to include lots of advertising features. Then I had to record my advertisement in the Garageband app, and add music (to make a 'donut' effect. The advertisement is a little bit long but I think I used excellent expression!

Delta Squad writing - comics and procedural writing